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TODAY'S STORIES
04.06.2008
Former Clinton Speechwriter on Hillary's Speech

We asked David Kusnet, Bill Clinton's former chief speechwriter and author of Love the Work, Hate the Job: Why America's Best Workers Are Unhappier than Ever, to give his impression of Hillary's non-concession speech.

Well, yes, Hillary Clinton's remarks last night were unusual. But, bear in mind, it's her situation that is unprecedented--not her speech.

The primaries and caucuses are all over. She trails by a narrower margin than any runner-up in either party since 1952. And keep in mind, there is no tradition of second-place finishers withdrawing on the nights their opponents clinch the nominations. Nelson Rockefeller in 1968, Ronald Reagan in 1976, Edward Kennedy in 1980, Gary Hart in 1984, and Jesse Jackson in 1988--they all kept going against even greater odds than Clinton faces now.

Of course, Clinton has no mathematical way to win, but in "the fullness of time," as old-fashioned orators used to say--and, these days, that can be by the end of a week--her intentions may become clearer. She'll have spoken to key supporters, to Barack Obama, and perhaps to her party's leaders in the Senate. Sooner or later, she'll give the speech most Democrats, including many who supported her, are awaiting--a gracious concession to Barack Obama and an appeal for party unity. The point isn't when she gives this speech but how she gives it--it must be a clarion call, not an uncertain trumpet.

Plus, a straightforward concession speech Tuesday night might have stranded some prominent backers, while affording some of her most devoted rank-and-file followers (and maybe the candidate herself) too little time to cool down from the intense emotions of the campaign. And silence was not an option (imagine what the commentators would have said if she hadn't spoken at all). So she gave a spirited and occasionally eloquent speech that summed up her campaign, thanked her supporters, and left the door open for whatever will be decided behind closed doors.

Yes, the speech sounded at times as if she had won, rather than lost, by the narrowest of margins. While ungrudgingly generous, her praise for Obama at the beginning of the speech sounded more like a winner consoling a loser. But what matters most is what came afterwards--or, more importantly, what didn't come afterwards. The tone of the remainder of her remarks was almost entirely elegiac--looking backwards to the issues she'd raised and the people she'd met, not forward to a further fight for the nomination. While she offered no answer to her own question--"Where do we go from here?"--her message was clear from her concluding declaration that she is committed to "uniting this party." True, she pointed yet again to her strength in the swing states, her margin (by some reckonings) in the popular vote, and her insistence that every vote be counted. But she must have known that these lines did not offer a ringing rationale for continuing her campaign through August. Indeed, she said little that hinted at actively competing in the weeks ahead and nothing that the Republicans could later use against Obama. Instead, she reiterated her support for the causes she had embraced in her campaign, most notably universal health coverage--commitments that are unifying rather than divisive for Democrats. 

The speech was in keeping with the populist tone she'd struck in the final leg of the campaign, when she won major industrial states, as well as areas where wages have long lagged behind the rest of the nation. Yes, she should have used that same kind of oratory to attack Bush, McCain, and the other adversaries whom she and Obama will soon be strafing together. But, contrary to what many of the TV commentators and other instant-responders have been saying, she set the stage for a graceful withdrawal, not a scorched-earth battle that would destroy the Democrats' chances.

No candidate has ever been in exactly the situation in which Clinton finds herself. Finding the right way out--and the right words to explain herself--will take a little time. That's the least the Democrats owe her in return for what they need from her.

--David Kusnet

Posted: Wednesday, June 04, 2008 11:16 AM with 25 comment(s)

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dbhuff said:

sorry, complete miss. while she didnt have to concede, she DID have to not bash the nominee on HIS night. Sorry, HRC showed her true colors one more time, putting Clinton before Party.

Afterall, she didnt lose last night, she's beenathematically out of it since Feb.

June 4, 2008 11:37 AM

AlanSP said:

The objection is not that she didn't concede last night.  The objection is that she had an opportunity to show some class on a historic night and she blew it by repeating her stump speech lines about being more electable and, even more infuriatingly, saying that she's won the popular vote; I doubt that even Clinton genuinely believes 328,000 to 0 is a fair way to count the Michigan vote, yet she does it in every speech she gives that touts a popular vote lead.  She actively stoked the belief among some of her supporters that Obama's nomination is somehow illegitimate.

Also, by way of historical precedent, you mention Nelson Rockefeller in 1968, Ronald Reagan in 1976, Edward Kennedy in 1980, Gary Hart in 1984, and Jesse Jackson in 1988.  It's worth pointing out that their opponents didn't do so well in the fall.  Nixon won in '68, but divisions in the Republican Party that year were utterly dwarfed by those in the Democratic Party, which essentially tore itself apart that year.  Not really the historical precedents I'd like Hillary to be following.

June 4, 2008 11:53 AM

liberal reformer said:

But she did lose rather than win, Mr. Kusnet and to speak as if she were the victor is churlsih. Hllary still has that sense of entitlement.

June 4, 2008 11:55 AM

roidubouloi said:

"Well, yes, Hillary Clinton's remarks last night were unusual."

Mmm, hmm.

Perhaps the reaction to Hillary's "victory speech" was conditioned by her behavior up until now which has been, shall we say, "unusual" in the Democratic party at least since George Wallace was running for president.  

I don't think that a gracious and unreserved endorsement of Obama by Hillary, free from threats, is in the cards myself.  But we shall soon see what she does.  I predict at best a muddied "withdrawal," some form of "onward to Denver," and a furious attempt behind the scenes to change the outcome with the super-delegates.  Wanna make book on it Mr. Kusnet?

The party does not owe Hillary anything.  It is she who has moral debts to the party she claims to belong to, at least if you think a political party is something more than a vehicle for personal advancement.

June 4, 2008 12:00 PM

fougasseu said:

The real threat looming for Obama appears on David Duke's website today.

http://www.davidduke.com/

Time for the Clintons to support Obama and stop the "he can't win" bit. He can win, especially if the Clintons lend a hand.

June 4, 2008 12:39 PM

LISAH said:

1. Clinton did get 1/2 the votes cast in this miserable primary year. Acknowledge that, Obama-bots. She damn near got the nomination. Acknoeldge that too, Obama-bots. She said nothing last night that deserves the vituperative mud-slinging aimed at her on this site.

2. Clinton campaign overall has been well within the uh, Roid, yet again -- "usual" campaign expectations and behavior in the U.S., and the Democratic party.

3. Get real: your guy is just another Chicago pol. He's no hero of hope and change and all that crap. And let's just hope he's enough of a pol to be as ruthless as he'll have to be in the general election.

4. I'm really annoyed that I have to keep making these obvious points in defense of someone I didn't and on't want in the first place. Really...

June 4, 2008 1:14 PM

boneill said:

Thanks, fougasseu.  Now I have davidsuke.com on my history at work.

June 4, 2008 1:22 PM

roidubouloi said:

Something about this piece really grated on me when I first read it, but I couldn’t quite put my finger on it until put it aside for a while.  Now I get it.  What I find so irritating is that the unspoken attitude partakes of the same narcissism and self-absorption that affects Hillary Clinton herself.  Is this a Clinton thing, given that Kusnet was a Clinton speechwriter, or is it just endemic amongst those who have spent time working in the White House?

What is jarring is that this piece seems to make the same assumption as Hillary does, that the political campaign both is and ought to be about the candidate, a personal drama of his or hers, and that we, the voters, must therefore all defer and subordinate the party’s interests to the emotional needs of the candidate as competitor.  While it is true that there are many easy analogies between athletic competition and sports competition, politics is not, however, a sport and a campaign, at least if we are a genuine democracy, is not about or principally the occasion for the candidate’s personal achievement.  

In theory, at least, we who are Democrats belong to the Democratic party because we believe that its political success leads to the greater good of the nation, better, more humane, more enlightened governance.  There are thousands upon thousands of people who labor for the Democratic party, without any expectation or desire for personal gain, just out of devotion to the community.  I know a bunch of them in my community and I am sure we are no different in that respect than anyplace else in America.  Sure, there are always graspers and climbers who attach themselves out of hope for gain.  But that isn’t the majority.  Maybe it is in the Republican party, which I regard as little more than a branch of organized crime the sole purpose of which is to siphon resources from the public into the pockets of the Republican hierarchy.  But the Democratic party is not supposed to be that.  

I have stood next to Chuck Schumer a couple of times when he spoke to groups of Democrats about the nature of their public calling to service.  And, goddamn it, I believed it then and believe it now.  Maybe he’s a total cynic too.  I don’t know.  But it moved me and made me feel like there was a reason why at the time I was killing myself for the success of the local party.

That’s supposed to be the deal.  Loyalty to the Democratic party is not supposed to be the sort of loyalty you expect in the mafia or the Republican party – obeisance to the next one up on the rung so that you can get yours when your turn comes.  It is supposed to be based on the fact that we are engaged in a common enterprise that we believe is for the good of the nation.  When we subordinate our personal interest, devote our sweat, our emotion, our money to the success of the party, it really is an act of devotion.

When someone like Hillary Clinton, who has already been entrusted with high office, holds herself out and asks for the votes of Democrats, it is supposed to be a given that she is in it fundamentally for the same reason as the rest of us, not to win it for herself, but to serve.  Of course there is a large dose of personal ambition, the desire for recognition and status.  But that is still supposed to be subordinate to our shared undertaking.  We still expect that the candidate recognizes that her personal ambition must be in the service of the greater cause.

When the race comes to an end, we therefore have every right to expect the losing candidate to return to the fold and assure the winner and the party that the basic understanding still holds, that when there is no longer a personal campaign to wage, the candidate, like the rest of us, is still motivated first and foremost by the prospect of success for the party and will, with the advantages of high office, work like the rest of us to that end.

The very idea that we instead must wait until the losing candidate is good and ready to re-join the party, must placate her, flatter her, and humbly ask her to resume her place among us is preposterous.  In its essence, it is royalist.  It is the very attitude that so often has Hillary accused of an unacceptable sense of entitlement to high office.  It says to the democratic polity that we have been nothing more than bit players in the candidate’s personal drama rather than she the humble offeror of her services to us, to be the champion of our cause, which we are free to accept if we think it best for us or not without then having to earn again the candidate’s political loyalty.

Hillary’s behavior is simply unacceptable.  Rather than take the occasion of her loss to acknowledge her place in the party, she takes the opportunity to declare herself, falsely, the victor.  Rather than at least declare her intention to work for the election of the party’s nominee, she declares that she, and not he, is worthy.  There is no excuse.

Obama surely has as much ambition as Hillary.  It could not be otherwise.  But he at least has the decency to observe in his speech and his behavior the democratic norm that an electoral contest is about the people and their welfare, not about the candidate and his or her ambition.  Hillary, and seemingly all like Kusnet who have done time in the Clinton circle, seem to have it all backwards.

June 4, 2008 1:33 PM

roidubouloi said:

You don't need to keep making these obvious point lisah because they don't mean anything, no matter how many times you make them.  It is of no relevance that Clinton got almost half the votes; she got less than half and that means she lost.  You think her campaign rhetoric has been within acceptable bounds.  Many of us don't.  We don't have to convince you and your repetition of the claim is not going to convince anyone.  No one that I know of who supports Obama thinks he is not a politician.  We just think he is a good politician, a lot better than Hillary who never learned how to be one because she was simply granted high office.

Don't be annoyed that you have to make these points.  Just don't bother.  Then you won't be annoyed and neither will anyone else.

And, lisah, she never got close to getting the nomination.  At every single round of voting, until the very end when she had already lost the race, she lost ground -- and that was after beginning with an enormous headstart.  It was already over by the end of February, but neither Hillary nor her supporters were able to deal with that reality.  Apparently, Hillary is still not able to do so.

June 4, 2008 1:40 PM

asnevitt said:

What bothers me about this piece is the lack of acknowledgment that it's been  known for quite some time that Hillary Clinton had not mathematical chance to win the nomination. This isn't something she has to come to terms with as of yesterday.

Also, your historical examples are not what we want to follow as they all led to losses, I believe. So, a wise leader would encourage us to do something differently this time. But that is precisely why Clinton has lost this primary: she hasn't shown wisdom. From the planning of the campaign, to her staff choices, to her "misspeaks", she has repeatedly shown that she does not have the clear-headed wisdom that we need in a leader.

And, why do we owe her? I don't get this. She chose to run for the nomination. She gets paid to be a U.S. Senator. She and her husband have reaped huge personal financial benefit from their public service. And I'm not sure I can point to anything in my life that is better because of Hllary Clinton. So, what exactly is that I/we/this country owes her?

June 4, 2008 1:53 PM

sportdoc62 said:

Some of us actually want Barak Obama, the nominee, to be elected and get something done, once elected.  An alarming number of HRC's supporters and members of her campaign have become a rabble that is threatening to become the (Geraldine Ferraro) face of the Democratic Party.   Last night Clinton had a responsibility to redirect both their attention and her own to the the "larger fight" to which she claims to be passionately devoted.  She did neither, despite the perfect opportunity to do so and disqualified herself as a VP prospect as a result.  Her continued visibility as a counter to the de facto nominee of her own party will send centrist voters straight to John McCain, who we all agree will do nothing but prolong our current foreign and domestic agonies.

Oh, and LISAH:

1. Obama did get more than 1/2 the votes cast in this miserable primary year. Acknowledge that, Clinton-bot.  He got the nomination. Acknowledge that too, Clinton-bot.  She said nothing last night that acknowledges these facts.

2. Obama's campaign overall has thankfully risen above the "usual" campaign expectations and behavior in the U.S. and the Democratic party, and people find that refreshing--a change, if you will. Alas, many actually vote for that.

3. Get real: your gal is a career first lady who did not pass the bar, inflated her own credentials, carpetbagged a senate seat in New York, campaigned as a resumption of her husband's presidency, and poisoned the well for health care reform for years.  Her campaign was mismanaged, full of hubris, entitlement, claimed self-exceptions from rules, boneheaded mistakes, and outright, repeated falsehoods.  She has almost nothing in common with the people she claims to represent.  (Why do all of these observations remind me of GWB's political career and the last eight years of the Bush administration?).  Let's hope Obama has the integrity not to be enough of a pol to be ruthless in order to be successful in the general election.

4. This is the last time I'll make these obvious points.   Really...

June 4, 2008 2:43 PM

areteone said:

The right way out?  Typically, this question is a stumper for someone named Clinton, and, typically, she failed in her attempt to answer it.

"I lost.  Barack won.  Now let's come together as a party and defeat John McCain in November."  Instead, she retreated to a bunker and continued to not only fight, but also declare herself leading on the scorecards.

HRC's speech last night was just the latest scene in the Clintons' never-ending cult-of-personality drama.  She started out as the ultimate party insider with the primary season a mere formality.  After blowing through 1/4 of a billion dollars and her game plan (which ended on Super Tuesday), she then stoked the mindless, divisive fears of populism and demanded the rules of the process be changed.

The right way out?  It's a question that's never crossed a Clinton mind.

June 4, 2008 2:48 PM

ironyroad said:

LISAH at point 4:  "I'm really annoyed that I have to keep making these obvious points in defense of someone I didn't and on't want in the first place. Really..."

1.  Posting is voluntary, I believe . . .

June 4, 2008 2:49 PM

LISAH said:

So, Roid -- do you really think Obama (or almost any politician) isn't narcissistic and self-absorbed? Why just toss that at Clinton? You acknowledge, sort of, that he's a pol at the same time that you continue your worshipful nonsense.

It is  relevant that she got 1/2 the votes (for all practical purposes it shakes out that way, given the numbers of votes cast)...That's a lot of people, and it reflects the simple fact that she has lots of support. It's simply not true that "she never got close to the nomination." She got very close, in numbers and in primaries (as opposed to caucuses -- a whole other issue in democratic theory and practice there) if not in the great ether of wiberalism which opted for race over gender -- because that face-off between the 2 is exactly what all the widdle wiberals wanted -- so they could show everyone how wonderfully wiberal and open-minded and tolerant they are. No more of those white male pols for them. Race v. gender is so much more exciting -- and so much more likely to gin up emotions and lead to the anger and antagonism and verbal ballistics we're seeing now.

There's a necessary winding down going on now, and that's okay and not unprecedented. She is clearly signalling that she intends to support him. It may take a while for things to settle down -- just let it happen instead of flame-throwing.

Your last post (before the one addressed to me) was eloquent. Good for you if you feel that way about being a Democrat . To some extent I do as well -- but without the fuzziness. Dems have been too fuzzy and ergo too weak over the past coupla decades. I'm ready for nasty and mean, and especially for effective,  in going after the Republicans and in correcting the damage they've done.

And I'm not going away -- not gonna stop calling you Obama-bots out when I feel the need -- and when I have the time.

June 4, 2008 3:04 PM

LISAH said:

ZEEESSSHHH --ironyroad and sportdoc62...

First, sportdoc62 -- how many times do I have to keep saying I didn't want Clinton and I didn't wan t Obama??? She ain't "my gal." Got that???? Won't go into the rest of your silly points re her career -- I don't have to defend her, since I have no use for political dynasties and I didn't support her.  And Obama's campaign, however much you worshippers may think so, did not rise above the general tenor of campaigns. Aside from the fan-clubby atmosphere and charismatic leader overtones, it really was just another dirty political campaign. And sportdoc, you damn well better hope that Obama is ruthless -- because that's what it's gonna take to win this election. That's politics.

Ironyroad -- I keep posting because I'm fed up with silly widdle wiberals and with Obama-bots.

June 4, 2008 3:15 PM

roidubouloi said:

I don't know what to make of that, but in my town, I orchestrated three straight electoral victories in which the Demcorats swept.  There are no Republicans left even though the party enrollment is just about dead even.  We did it, in part, by being willing to go toe-to-toe with the Republicans where they live, in the gutter.  When my members said, "But we have to take the high road" I replied that we had a civic responsibility to be successful, within the bounds of honesty and decency, but that anyone who was not ready for a hard fight should get out of the political line.

Then we went ahead and kicked them out.

Yeah, I do feel that there has to be a powerful element of public service in being any sort of Democratic activist.  Except for the very few at the top, there really is nothing else in it.  It sure doesn't make me money.  Quite the reverse.

I don't support Obama because he is black.  I support him for five reasons 1) he is a great speaker and politics is largely the art of persuasion, 2) he seems to understand that we actually have to put identity politics behind us (contrary to your accusation that I am someone who is mired in identity politics), 3) he appears to understand the difference between policy and politics, 4) I have every reason to believe that he is a genuine "man of the left."  5) He's smart enough for the job.  To me that means he has the necessary tools and ideological disposition.  I cannot tell whether he will use them well.  I hope so.  In my opinion of Hillary, not one of the five holds true.

I don't know why you think "widdle wiberals" produced this "face-off."  Obama and Hillary produced the face-off.  The rest of us just get opinions.

No, she was never close.  If you start off ahead and by the time of the first primaries fall behind and then can further behind with every round, it doesn't matter at all whether the aggregates in the end were close.  She was never close and by the end of February she had already lost.  

No one thinks you should go away, but there is no need to complain about the burden of posting.  If you don't want to, don't.  As someone else said above, it is not obligatory.

June 4, 2008 3:42 PM

LISAH said:

okay, Roid...basically I agree with your 5 points on Obama, although what "man of the left" means these days is a bit of a conundrum and largely meaningless. And while I agree he's fine as a speaker, I don't get the vibes.  My reaction to his speeches has mostly been along the lines of "uh-huh? And what else" and so on.  And I just happen to think your points pretty much apply as much to Clinton as they do to Obama. And the real point is that just about any of the others forced out early because they weren't female of black (and yell all you want --that played a big role in producing the face-off) were good speakers, understand politics, etc. and so forth.

If you have a chance, someone just e-mailed me Tony Auth's cartoon today. Take a look. It's right on target -- sad to say. This primary campaign has raised sexism and racism issues to an increasingly mindless level.

June 4, 2008 4:26 PM

LISAH said:

...and as to whether Clinton "started ahead..." Who knows? Yes, she had a lotta organization and a lotta $$$ But how much was media hype, how much real? Etc.

And how many of her problems were out-and-out sexism and overall perceptions of women as candidates? Who knows? A basic point is that she shouldn't have been the first serious female presidential candidates precisely because of who she is -- I'm not into riding your man's coattails, no matter how competent she is ( and guys, she really is competent and all that stuff). How many of her problems were slip-ups and gaffes? Sure, alot. But Obama crew made their own share -- and got a lot less grief for their slip-ups than the Clinton camp did.

June 4, 2008 4:47 PM

marcellusw101 said:

Sorry to interrupt roid's and Lisah's playground pillow fight, but a quick correction to the historical record is in order. Rockefeller, Reagan, Kennedy, Hart, and Jackson did not face "greater odds" HRC faces. They faced exactly the same odds as she faces now, which is to say precisely zero. It didn't make sense for any of those fellows to continue then, and it makes no sense for Clinton to continue now. She's been on life support since March, and Obama's NC victory a month ago closed things out. She and her supporters have had time to come to terms with Obama's nomination, they have simply chosen not to do so.

June 4, 2008 4:54 PM

roidubouloi said:

Lisah, Hillary may not be incompetent, she might even be competent, but I see exactly zero evidence of her competence at anything.  What has she ever achieved on her own?  What has she ever done that demonstrates her competence?  Wrecking the Clinton healthcare initiative in the 90s?  Losing Democratic control of the Congress?  Flunking the DC bar?  Being a nothing partner in a nothing law firm in Little Rock, AK? Give wonky speeches?  Screwing up her campaign?  This is one of the things that seems to me just to get repeated endlessly without any foundation at all.

June 4, 2008 5:43 PM

roidubouloi said:

No interruption at all marcellus.

June 4, 2008 5:43 PM

roidubouloi said:

As I was saying:

Hillary has authored exactly two pieces of legislation that were enacted, but they are so trivial I have never been able to find out what they were.

So, on what basis can anyone make the claim that Hillary is "competent?"  At what, exactly?

June 4, 2008 5:46 PM

ironyroad said:

LISAH writes "I keep posting because I'm fed up with silly widdle wiberals and with Obama-bots."

Well, that's pretty much how it comes across.  Not much of a reason, though, is it?  I mean, we're all adults here and we have our own position on issues and suchlike, so nothing you're doing at the moment achieves anything except making people cringe in embarassment.

June 4, 2008 7:14 PM

three putt said:

Irony you called exactly...LISAH makes me feel embarrassed.

June 4, 2008 9:09 PM

Robert Powell said:

If you want REAL embarrassment, continue to treat your national political opponents (and by extension their millions of supporters) as deadly enemies.  The characteristic of Obama that's attracted me to his candidacy from Day 1 is his ability to give respect and serious consideration to the opinions of those with whom he disagrees. All those Bush voters out there aren't bloodthirsty neo-imperialist dupes and rubes.

June 5, 2008 4:48 AM